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I visited you on your ward today.
But I just couldn’t find you.
I was sitting talking to this figure before me; and the sentiments had never been so hard to come by.
I asked you trivial, mundane, questions; politeness to hide my fear.
You spilled out words and I heard them all.
But yet I knew you were not there.
I touched your skin; felt it’s warmth.
I smelt that familiar unique scent that you always carried upon your person.
But everything I experienced with a quiet creeping horror; they were just empty sensations without the real man.
You were there in essence before me… But my God… I just couldn’t see you.
Whatever it was that made you so special to me, so important to my world, it’s missing now…
When you kissed me it was so empty; so hollow.
You kissed me and for the life of me I couldn’t find you, within that moment, to kiss you back.
What made you you is lost… And now I fear so am I…
I want you.
I miss you.
But you’ve been taken from me… You’re robbed of the things that made you elegant and beautiful and so insanely irresistible to me this mourning admirer.
When you can… If you can…
Please I beg…
One day come back to me.
But I just couldn’t find you.
I was sitting talking to this figure before me; and the sentiments had never been so hard to come by.
I asked you trivial, mundane, questions; politeness to hide my fear.
You spilled out words and I heard them all.
But yet I knew you were not there.
I touched your skin; felt it’s warmth.
I smelt that familiar unique scent that you always carried upon your person.
But everything I experienced with a quiet creeping horror; they were just empty sensations without the real man.
You were there in essence before me… But my God… I just couldn’t see you.
Whatever it was that made you so special to me, so important to my world, it’s missing now…
When you kissed me it was so empty; so hollow.
You kissed me and for the life of me I couldn’t find you, within that moment, to kiss you back.
What made you you is lost… And now I fear so am I…
I want you.
I miss you.
But you’ve been taken from me… You’re robbed of the things that made you elegant and beautiful and so insanely irresistible to me this mourning admirer.
When you can… If you can…
Please I beg…
One day come back to me.
Yet another (and there will be more) entry for 
s contest.
Basically you choose a prompt from a list of ten and from that you have to create either a work of art with original characters or a fanfiction.
I chose the prompt Disappear.
Please check out the details here: [link] and hey why not enter?
I visited someone I care about in a psych ward the other day and it nearly killed me to see him like that. The person I cared so much for was so hard to find within his illness. I wrote it and realised it fitted with the prompt for the contest. The person I wanted so much to see had disappeared.
EDIT:
The person I wrote this about killed himself a couple of weeks ago, it's so ironic to think I missed him then and now he has gone completely, forever. If you ever love someone, a friend, a lover. Tell them. Tell them and never let them go.
s contest.Basically you choose a prompt from a list of ten and from that you have to create either a work of art with original characters or a fanfiction.
I chose the prompt Disappear.
Please check out the details here: [link] and hey why not enter?
I visited someone I care about in a psych ward the other day and it nearly killed me to see him like that. The person I cared so much for was so hard to find within his illness. I wrote it and realised it fitted with the prompt for the contest. The person I wanted so much to see had disappeared.
EDIT:
The person I wrote this about killed himself a couple of weeks ago, it's so ironic to think I missed him then and now he has gone completely, forever. If you ever love someone, a friend, a lover. Tell them. Tell them and never let them go.
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aww
Your writing is always sad...
but... I think that's why i love it all so much <3
Your writing is always sad...
but... I think that's why i love it all so much <3